I like it, but may I make some suggestions ?
At the end of the tract, rather than make the 'sinners prayer' the emphasis (which was spawned from the early Billy Graham crusades). I would suggest making scripture relevant to salvation the emphasis, Romans 10:17 So then faith
cometh by hearing, and hearing by the word of God.
Stating that the Bible declares
Acts 2:21 And it shall come to pass,
that whosoever shall call on the name of the Lord shall be saved.Acts 16:31 And they said,
Believe on the Lord Jesus Christ, and thou shalt be saved, ...........
Romans 10:9 That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus,
and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved.Acts 8:37 And Philip said, If thou believest with all thine heart, thou mayest. And he answered and said, I believe that Jesus Christ is the Son of God.
Dont get me wrong I am not knocking the sinners prayer as you have worded it, and if people feel the need to say a prayer, they must be well aware that it is not the prayer itself that saves them, but the Believing on Christ as their Saviour.
The Bibles 'Sinners Prayer'
Luke 18:13 And the publican, standing afar off, would not lift up so much as his eyes unto heaven, but smote upon his breast, saying, God be merciful to me a sinner.
Good work, Keep em coming!
God Bless and keep you and your efforts in his name.